来自于沪江博客新东方牛牛俞鑫的博客：http://blog.hjenglish.com/yx/外教例文3（这篇文章内容比较难写的）
百忙中还是抽点时间，贴点对写作有帮助的东西。
下面这篇文章是比较冷门的一篇，请我的美国朋友写的，大家看一下，good luck
Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved facilities and better machinery. However, some of the methods may be dangerous to human health, and may have negative effects on local community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved techniques and facilities and better machinery. Some of these methods however may be dangerous to human health and may have negative effects on local communities.(这里都照抄了原文，雅思考试时不能这么写，要丢分的！！！) The importance of this impact has been debated by many but not enough has been done to address these emerging problems.
When the issue of food production management is first raised, many will immediately point out the legions of starving nations in the world, the lack of sufficient food, the poverty induced starvation and such. This seems to imply some justification for the adoption of new methods of food production and the sacrifice of high standards of safety and quality. Bringing food to those who need it is a noble cause, and indeed should be one of the primary concerns of so-called developed and developing countries. Food management and distribution are however much greater issues than new methods of food production.
There is no lack of food in the world. Food that would feed those who are starving goes instead in to the bellies of cows and other livestock that consume enough in their lifetimes to feed hundreds. Restaurants prepare more food than their customers could ever consume, food in one part of the world goes into the garbage while people in another starve to death. The primary drive behind new methods of food production is not service of the public, but comes from private companies and farmers hoping to secure larger profits by adopting more efficient and less expensive methods.
Like death and taxes, food is the great leveler of all mankind. Everyone needs to eat, and the quality and safety of that food determines the quality of our lives. Steps must be taken to ensure that standards are created and rigorously enforced.
还有更多的雅思名师博客就在沪江博客中：http://blog.hjenglish.com/
大家快去看看吧！！！
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